All I could say is I love the message that it conveys, and the surrealism and the dark foreboding sense of the work(plus the abstract style of it) really gives that impact! The message was flown subtly while somehow being contrasted by the darkness of the work; which I must say is a smooth blend of exotic flavors...a hard skill to master I must say. And sir, I think you have that special skill! As for any improvements...I don't see any flaw; maybe focus on the 2 subjects of your work to give a much more impact.
Hope to see more from you...and congratulations on this well-tailored masterpiece.